Monday, October 26, 2009

Emotions and mystery MOODS!!

whats the mood! :D

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He stepped into the room, silently, his face covered by his dark hood, hair still dripping from the rain. He was dressed all in black, naturally, expression covered in the shadow of his clothes so that we were left to guess at his expression underneath. I could hear Doctor 7 shuffle his feet behind me. I frowned.
"Does this one look promising?" I whispered to Doctor 7, knowing the uneasy feeling coming from this passerby wasn't a coincidence.
Doctor 7 cocked his head, and paused for a moment, rearranging a single flower in the vase near his hand. Although it appeared like he was straightening the pot I knew better--He was actually looking over the handsome young man from the corner of his eyes.
"Hmm..."He mused. His black eyes twinkled in the low light. "Appearances can be deceiving, I'm sure...But, in this case..."
I winced as the young man stalked slowly over to the counter, his boots dragging roughly against the floor. Doctor 7's calm voice continued on.
"Bring him to me. I'll question him from my office."
I turned to give my OK to Doctor 7, but he was gone.
The young man leaned over the counter, and he looked straight at me.
Neither one of us spoke.
Then, the young lad took off his hood, and I found myself looking into a pair of the most gentle and kind-hearted looking eyes I had ever seen in my life. His soft blonde hair fell free from his dark hood and the smile he gave me moved my heart. He flashed me a wide, perfect smile.
"Hello," he said.
My heart melted.
When I blinked again however, I caught the sharpness of some hidden emotion behind his eyes. The way he kept shifting uneasily from one foot to another, the way his one hand had never left his pocket...
"This way," I said leading him to Doctor 7. "Welcome to the Post Office. I'm sure we have something for you in the back."

3 comments:

  1. Hi Meesoh =)

    1) The mood is suspicious.

    2) I believe that this is the mood because it mentions questioning and the description of the man is mysterious.

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  2. Suspicious!! The way you described the clothing and how the man was standing. It made me wonder who he was and what was going on. Good story behind that Meesoh! You should finish it~~

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  3. :D
    yay!
    The mood that I was trying to convey was suspicious. I did this by describing the man and his actions in a dark and moody way. Also, the mention of Doctor7 was supposed to add to the suspicious mood~

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